I became a villain and was harassed by beautiful girls
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Actually, I have written about this, but due to space constraints, I can only give the word count for one or two volumes. Judging from the response, it may still not be good enough.
The second point is the arrangement of the plot.
The starting point of this book is “funny and easy to read throughout”, and theoretically, plot arrangements involving deep hatred and bitterness are prohibited, so I still made a choice on the aspect of “exposing identity”.
I also said at the end of that volume that the original plot was actually another arrangement. Tang Xin’s identity was exposed and he was accused by the righteous path. After going to the evil path, he was out of reach of Su Ling and others. Until the Blood Zun Palace launched a full-scale attack, he was in a “miserable” state.
But then I thought, this seems to go against the main theme of the book, right? Isn’t the central theme “resisting the fate of becoming a villain”? So it became this arrangement that was written.
However, this will also cause problems, that is, the lack of “plot tension”. The reason why the hatred is great and the bitterness is deep is that it is inherently accompanied by huge contradictions and conflicts. Only when there is conflict can the story have explosive points and attract people’s attention.
Well… maybe there is a plot arrangement that allows you to have both, but I probably didn’t think of it at the time.
In the final analysis, these two points are caused by my lack of an outline, no drafts, and no brains…
There are problems, but I personally think that the plot arrangement of this book is reasonable, the overall completeness is also good, and the consistent positive energy style is also good. It is suitable for the whole family to watch together (laughs), and 7 points is reasonable.
Talk about the new book.
Well… to be honest, I feel that the new book I’m writing now, “After I Lost My Power, They Wanted to Make Me a Loser,” is a bit off and not interesting enough. I’ve discussed with the editor that I’ll post it up once the word count is reached to see how it goes. After all, sometimes the author’s intuition may be wrong… So it would be great if you could just bookmark it, nothing else is necessary.
My personal belief is that books that are put on the shelves and people pay to read must be finished, so it is easy to make mistakes before they are put on the shelves…Okay, if this book is not good, I will come and give you a shout when I start a new book.
Finally, I would like to thank all the friends who have read all the way to the end. Writing a book, in addition to making money, can also bring a lot of fun from the discussions between the lines, just like chatting with many friends, which is also my motivation to continue.
Our green mountains remain unchanged, and our green rivers flow forever. Wait, this doesn’t sound very nice…
Then I wish everyone happy every day!
Extra Chapter: The Victim Ling Hua’s Counterattack
Qingzhou, Xuanling Sect, the master’s hall.
“So, do you support me? This matter has been dragging on for a long time. Even Tang Xin has confessed her love to my apprentice. As a master, I can’t show weakness, right?”
Inside the hall, the elders of Xuanling Sect were standing or sitting, some were working, and some were chatting about family matters.
Although after the world-destroying war, the cultivation world of Jiuzhou had completed a generational change and the world now belonged to the younger generation, these old bones still had to complete their tasks behind the scenes.
For example, chatting, planting flowers, and raising grass…
“Alright,” Yu Lingzi, who was reading the report, couldn’t help but look up and complained, “You’ve been talking all morning. If you want to go, go ahead. No one here will stop you!”
“Why is this happening?” Ling Hua said dissatisfiedly, “This is a major event in my life, can’t you take it a little more seriously?”
“The big things in life…”
The loli leader’s mouth twitched and she signaled to the great elder next to her.
“Come on,” Xuan Miao encouraged her, “We support you!”
“Yes, you should strike when the time comes. Otherwise, when you are old and ugly, you will have no advantage…”
Punishment Elder Mu Jianxue reminded with an expressionless face.
“Humph,” Ling Hua stamped her feet, “You are just jealous of me! When I succeed in my confession, I will blind your dog eyes!”
After saying that, the beautiful elder left the hall angrily.
“Finally left.” “Let’s continue playing cards.” “By the way, where is Feiyao now?” “I don’t know. She seemed to say that she wanted to find a target to try out the new method she developed…”
……
As we all know, if you don’t express your feelings to the person you like, she or he/she will have no idea that you like her.
Ling Hua has lived with Senior Sister Fei Yao for quite some time. In the past, this was a happy scene that Elder Meiren would never have dared to imagine.
But, people always have to go a step further and have higher pursuits to be worthy of themselves.
In short, Ling Hua wants to take down Senior Sister Fei Yao.
On the bed, on the floor, in the bathtub, on the grass…we are all adults, there is nothing we can’t let go of!
Logically speaking, given the relationship between me and my senior sister, doing these things would be as easy as breaking the window paper.
But when the time came, the beautiful elder actually became shy like a normal person…
There’s no way around it. When facing someone you like, you’ll always worry to some extent, wondering if you’re being too sentimental.
“We can’t wait any longer, we have to take it down now, today!”
After asking for a long time, Ling Hua finally found out the location of Senior Sister Feiyao.
With excitement, she came to the top of the hill and was about to knock on the door to go in.
“Elder Feiyao, don’t, Elder Feiyao, ah~~~”
As a result, very indecent moaning sounds were heard in the room.
What? Senior Sister Feiyao is actually with someone else?
Linghua’s excitement was instantly extinguished. She tiptoed to the window and peeked inside cautiously.
The scene inside almost made her vomit blood.
Senior Sister Feiyao, who was always serious (in her eyes), was actually wearing only a silk nightgown, kneeling on someone, moving around!
Ha, ha ha, impossible, this can’t be true!
Linghua held her head in her hands.
“How’s it going? Huh, my technique is pretty good, right…”
Senior Sister Feiyao seemed to be exercising and talking at the same time, panting heavily.
No, no, Senior Sister Feiyao, how can you… Even if you have desires, you can come to me!
“Elder Feiyao, if we are seen like this, people will misunderstand us…”
Another person inside said.
“Misunderstanding? What misunderstanding? I, Feiyao, never care about gossip. Let them talk! Take my move again, like a whale sucking water!”
“Ah~~~”
Listening to the cheerful shouts inside, Linghua outside the window could only bite her silk scarf to hold back her tears.
Senior sister, I obviously like you so much, how could you betray me…
No, Senior Sister would never betray me! She must have been seduced by the little bitch inside! That must be the case!
Damn it! Today I want to see who can do such a shameless thing!
Ling Hua secretly looked up again, but from this angle, she could only see a woman with a curvy figure lying on the bed, also wearing a sexy nightgown.
It was just as I thought, such a vulgar body, even I felt a little out of control when I saw it!
“Ah, speaking of which, Elder Feiyao, how are you and Linghua doing? I see that she always looks like she wants to eat you up. Is there any progress between you two?”
The woman on the bed seemed to be chatting with her senior sister.
“How should I answer your question…”
Elder Feiyao laughed twice.
“She and I have always been as close as sisters. At this age, there are many things that don’t require formality. It’s good to be together.”
“Elder Feiyao is mature enough, of course he can think so… please move up a little,” said another woman, “but Linghua is different. She has a childish personality and is easily worried about gains and losses. She must be afraid that you will leave again one day, so she always does those foolish things.”
“Really?” Fei Yao said in a deep voice, “Speaking of which, it is my problem. Although I took care of her back then, it seems that I also left her with a demon in her heart… Do you have any good suggestions?”
“What can I say? She’s already like this, isn’t it enough to just obey her? Ah~~~ That’s the strength, use a little more force!”
“But wouldn’t this mess up the relationship? And if I just obey her blindly, what if she becomes more childish? Besides, she and I are more like family, and I really don’t have any thoughts in that regard… She’s so young and doesn’t have the strength to fight back, look at me, my two poisonous dragons. Drill!”
Listening to the conversation inside, Linghua felt both moved and sad.
I was touched because it turned out that Senior Sister Feiyao had always had me in her heart and was still taking care of me as attentively as before.
I was sad because she refused to sleep with me and even went to bed with another woman…
It’s not that I want to monopolize my senior sister, I just hope that our relationship can continue to grow and stay together for the rest of our lives.
“Who do you think of that?”
“Needless to say… for you? Isn’t it very consistent with the plot that the two senior sisters of Xuanling Sect are together? Come on, give me a kiss!”
Depend on!
Linghua couldn’t bear it any longer, so she kicked the door open and shouted at the person lying on the bed enjoying a massage.
“Tang Xin, I can’t stand with you!”
“Oh my god, why is there someone eavesdropping outside? Linghua, listen to me…”
Tang Xin wanted to get up, but Elder Fei Yao pressed him down on the waist and he couldn’t move.
Both of them were wearing pajamas, and during the struggle, most of their spring scenery was exposed, which made people’s blood boil and their mouths dry.
“It’s no use saying anything,” Ling Hua sniffed and said with determination, “I’m going to do it to you today and make you crazy about me! This way, if Senior Sister wants you and you want me, it means I get Senior Sister!”
“ha……?!”
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Occasionally, I’ll do some small extras (laughs)
I have a question. I want to ask everyone, what kind of themes do you think are fresh and interesting? I haven’t seen many on Pineapple Bun… I’m usually too busy, so I don’t read enough… The end of the world doesn’t fit the style of light-hearted comedy. Pure ancient style? One mind and two bodies? I always feel like I can’t think of enough interesting ideas…
Extra Chapter: Xue Jiaojiao’s Great Escape – Part 1
Jiuzhou Continent, Xuzhou, location unknown.
There are barren mountains and wilderness, and yellow sand all over the ground. This is a remote place, so remote that it is not even marked on the latest version of the Kyushu map.
There is a lack of spiritual energy, the environment is harsh, it is deserted and even a bird cannot even walk around.
Such a place is suitable for detaining criminals who have caused serious damage to Jiuzhou and the Void World.
After the final battle, the Jiuzhou Alliance detained a large number of Blood Lord Hall members.
Although they were once enemies, it was impossible to chop off all of them. Some of those with less serious crimes had been sent to the front line to carry out repair work and atone for their sins.
Those who are imprisoned here are naturally dangerous and important people.